Saturday, June 12, 2010

What A Beautiful Day It Was!!!!!!!!!!!


What a beautiful day it was,

When the sun rose to shine,

Rays to fall and water to clear,

Pale as red the ocean water looked.


What a beautiful day it was,

Making to look at the morning sun,

To create the image on the water stand,

Never to depart till the end of the day.


What a beautiful day it was,

For the birds to sing,

And the nature to smile,

For the trees to dance in the morning breeze.


Sun to follow the rays,

And the people to work for the day,

Not to like the rays of the noon,

But still to be with the bright sun.

It’s time for you to go,

And to rise again with new waves,

Not to send you so early,

Yet left to respect the ways of nature,


What a beautiful day you brought,

For all who loved to drought,

Hoping to see you again,

Here I lye on my bed!!!!


9 comments:

  1. Nice lines :) liked it a lot :)

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  2. Beautifull indeed..:) very simply written.::)

    PS: A small suggestion if you dont mind.. i think a better font could have made it more nice read..pls chk..:)

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  3. What a beutiful poem..? should I say..?!!! nicely written, one suggestion...red cannot be pale...!!! as it is shown to be an expressive colour. You could had made it more attractive by making rhyming ends...
    only a suggestion...But the imaginations are beutiful....

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